Tameka Bowsher
Friday, August 12, 2011
Desires to be Enslaved-a short poem. CRITIQUE PLEASE?
quite a good start. There's a little problem relating the word "enslaved" in the last lines with the rest of the poem. Somehow, the rest of the poem does not support the idea of being enslaved.
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